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Loks like the Spanish translation is incorrect. The adjective "iron" in the last sentence should go only with the word will. "Iron will" is a well-known phrase. As translated, it modifies all three words.

Message definition (Serapis Bey)

Known as the Great Disciplinarian, Serapis came from [[Venus (the planet)|Venus]] with the [[Ancient of Days]] to rekindle the sacred fire in the hearts of a wayward mankind. His great enthusiasm to reclaim the sons of man as kings and priests unto God swelled and mounted into a flame of iron will, determination and discipline.

M&TR

Loks like the Spanish translation is incorrect. The adjective "iron" in the last sentence should go only with the word will. "Iron will" is a well-known phrase. As translated, it modifies all three words.

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			Loks like the Spanish translation is incorrect. The adjective "iron" in the last sentence should go only with the word will. "Iron will" is a well-known phrase. As translated, it modifies all three words.